Friday, March 11, 2011

Melefa's swimming Sports Recount Beginning


I was so nervous. "Number ones come up please".
I looked at my hand "oh no" I said. My body was shaking like an earthquake was happening. I had just calmed down but my brain was still shaking like a volcano was going to erupt. When I entered the pool I felt so shy. Mrs Stewart hit the two woods together, thats when I got shocked...
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  1. youseokMarch 14, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    That was the best story I've heard. You have heaps of great adjectives.

    From : Youseok

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  2. lataMarch 14, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    Wow Melefa i know how you feel when you meen "my body was shaking like an earth quake" that was an amazing simile that you made.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 15, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    That was a amazing story. I wish that I could write like you.
    Christina

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