...Mum decided to go for a run through Eskdale bush. As mum was packing her bag with water I shot off like Lance Armstrong flying to walk on the moon. As I got up to Eskdale bush I saw a water tap. I drunk from it like there was no tomorrow. There was a really big tree that caught my eye so I climbed the tree like a little Tarzan...
Woah,what an awesome recount Ethan. It has alot of advectives and verbs.
ReplyDeleteIm like a little tarzan too. from Isaac
ReplyDeleteAwesome recount Ethan there was a lot of discriptive words in it
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